3/5 Stars in total
there are good things in this song but also bad things. but don't worry not every song is perfect!
+ You know how to build a good song!
+ The sound design is simply good (not the best tho)
+ it's creative
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- the song is repetitive
- the mixing is not that good (it clips that much that it distorts which makes the song almost a wall of sound)
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anyway keep up! don't give up mate :P
also try keeping the master level below red. (about 3db)
don't put distortion to the master channel (if you even have some there)